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- The biggest mistake for every body is that, when they face a problem choose escape instead of stay.
- If stay and win, they got respect, and if they loose, learn a lesson to invincibility

lllBahramlllJune 2017Voĉdoni nun!
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PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

Titolo
- Correction and improvement
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Titolo
Frazo 1
- The biggest mistake for every body is that, when they face a problem choose escape instead of stay.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- The biggest mistake for every body is that, ¶
  when they face a problem they choose to escape instead of ~~stay~~facing it.
  AjayKumar Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  67% GOOD (3 votes)
- The biggest mistake for every body is that, ¶
  when they face a problem they choose escape instead of ~~stay~~confronting a problem.
  Nutkingye Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  50% GOOD (2 votes)
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
Frazo 2
- If stay and win, they got respect, and if they loose, learn a lesson to invincibility
  Voĉdoni nun!
- If stay and win, they goet respect,¶
  and if they loose, they learn a lesson tof invincibility.
  AjayKumar Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  50% GOOD (2 votes)
- If they stay and win, they goet respect,¶
  ~~and~~but if they loose, they learn a lesson tof invincibility.
  Nutkingye Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  100% GOOD (2 votes)
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2