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  • Emotions make the difference in our memories

    • One of the question that many scientists have always tried to answer is whether it is possible to establish how accurate are memories.
    • Many researches on human mind have been conducted to solve this problem, using every kind of method, but the conclusion has always been the same.
  • Scientists state that our memories depend on the intensity of emotions and perceptions associated with them.
  • Probably this is the reason why some recollections are more accurate than others.
    • As neurolinguistics affirms, our memories are the result of all the perceptions and emotions we associate with them.
  • Our brain is like a computer, that catches and analyses all the aspects of a perception and classifies them in images of the mind that we associate with a memory or a word (Saussure, 1916).
  • The more intense a perception is, the more likely we will remember it.
    • Indeed, researches on human mind have shown that in our brain there is a part, called hippocampus, that has a crucial role in deciding which memories should be remembered in the long-term or in the short-term.
  • As a matter of fact, neuroscientists assume that the more often you remember an event, the more stable it will become in your memory.
  • Completely in contrast with it, is the idea of Marc Green, who sustains that "recollections become less accurate with each retelling".
    • Probably our mind covers the aspects we do not remember immediatedly, adding new informations that are not true, that are the result of our imagination (Loftus and her colleagues).
    • A recent event that happened to me last week shows how memories are not always trusting.
    • Last saturday I had to prepare a cake to celebrate my grandmother's birthday.
    • After spending two hours thinking about what kind of cake I had to prepare, an unexpected memory came surprisingly to my mind and I decided to prepare the chocolate cake my grandmother used to bake me when I was a child.
  • According to my mother, I had to add a little cinnamon in the cream, but as I remembered, I did not associate that taste with my recollection.
    • Consequently I decided to follow my recipe, but unfortunately the cake was completely different from my grandmother's one.
    • This is the demonstration that childhood memories are not fairly accurate and we can not be completely sure of our recollections.
  • As previously said, accuracy could be found only if an event or an action has been significant and important for us.
  • To conclude, personal experience is the discerning key-factor in classifying long or short-term memories.

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  • Frazo 1
    • One of the question that many scientists have always tried to answer is whether it is possible to establish how accurate are memories.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • One of the question that many scientists have always tried to answer is whether it is possible to establishdetermin how accurate areour memories are.
      egalegal profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • One of the question that many scientists have always tried to answer is whether it is possible to establishdetermine how accurate areour memories are.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • Many researches on human mind have been conducted to solve this problem, using every kind of method, but the conclusion has always been the same.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Many researches on human's mind have been conducted to solve this problem, using every kind of method, but the conclusionresult has always been the same.
      egalegal profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
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  • Frazo 4
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  • Frazo 6
    • Our brain is like a computer, that catches and analyses all the aspects of a perception and classifies them in images of the mind that we associate with a memory or a word (Saussure, 1916).
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • Indeed, researches on human mind have shown that in our brain there is a part, called hippocampus, that has a crucial role in deciding which memories should be remembered in the long-term or in the short-term.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Indeed, researches on human mind have shown that in our brain there is a part, called hippo-campus, that has a crucial role in deciding which memories should be rememberedkept in the long-term or in the short-term.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • As a matter of fact, neuroscientists assume that the more often you remember an event, the more stable it will become in your memory.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • Completely in contrast with it, is the idea of Marc Green, who sustains that "recollections become less accurate with each retelling".
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
    • Probably our mind covers the aspects we do not remember immediatedly, adding new informations that are not true, that are the result of our imagination (Loftus and her colleagues).
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Probably our mind covers the aspects we do not remember immediatedly, adding new informations that are not true, that are the results of our imagination (Loftus and her colleagues).
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11
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  • Frazo 14
    • After spending two hours thinking about what kind of cake I had to prepare, an unexpected memory came surprisingly to my mind and I decided to prepare the chocolate cake my grandmother used to bake me when I was a child.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • After spending two hours thinking about what kind of cake I had to prepare, an unexpected memory came surprisingly to my mind and I decided to prepare the chocolate cake my grandmother used to bake for me when I was a child.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14
  • Frazo 15
    • According to my mother, I had to add a little cinnamon in the cream, but as I remembered, I did not associate that taste with my recollection.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15
  • Frazo 16
    • Consequently I decided to follow my recipe, but unfortunately the cake was completely different from my grandmother's one.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Consequently I decided to follow my recipe, but unfortunately the cake was completely different from the one prepared by my grandmother's one.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 16ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 16
  • Frazo 17
    • This is the demonstration that childhood memories are not fairly accurate and we can not be completely sure of our recollections.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • This is the demonstration that childhood memories are not fairly accurate and we can not be completely sure of our recollections.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 17ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 17
  • Frazo 18
    • As previously said, accuracy could be found only if an event or an action has been significant and important for us.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 18ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 18
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