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  • II.Immigration (second part)

    • (Hi everyone, please pay attention to this text, it's really important for me :) I'd like to thank you if you could able to correct it, I'd really appreciate it!
  • It's for an important oral exam.) Immigrants don't have the same reasons to leave their native country for the United States; everything depends to the age, their hopes and "with who they leave" .
  • For example, we studied two texts where were presented the situation of 2 persons who immigrated in New York.
  • Kayla , from Cuba , arrived in New York because she followed her parents.
  • She feels good in her new life and she doesn't want to go back to Cuba but she's legal immigrant .
  • Miguel , from Mexico came to New York because he would like to study in an American University in the aim to find a good job .
  • He wants to live the American dream.

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    • (Hi everyone, please pay attention to this text, it's really important for me :) I'd like to thank you if you could able to correct it, I'd really appreciate it!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • (Hi everyone, please pay attention to this text, it's really important for me :) I'd like to thank you if you could able to correct it, I'd really appreciate it!
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    • It's for an important oral exam.) Immigrants don't have the same reasons to leave their native country for the United States; everything depends to the age, their hopes and "with who they leave" .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • For example, we studied two texts where were presented the situation of 2 persons who immigrated in New York.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Miguel , from Mexico came to New York because he would like to study in an American University in the aim to find a good job .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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