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  • My name is Yuliya Makogon.
    • Currently I'm third year student and I study advertising.
    • This is a developing sphere in Ukraine, that's why I want to be involved into this process and to make a contribution, because I really want to make my country better and make everything in my power.
    • So I want gain experience from other countries to make my vision more complex.
    • I think that modern people should be multifaceted, therefore I like to study and develop in different spheres: music, design, philosophy, advertising and as well filmmaking.

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    • This is a developing sphere in Ukraine, that's why I want to be involved into this process and to make a contribution, because I really want to make my country better and make everything in my power.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • This is a developing sphere in Ukraine, that's why I want to be involved into this process and to make a contribution, because I really want to make my country better and make everything which is in my power.
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    • This is a developing sphere in Ukraine, that's why. I want to be involved into this process and to make a contribution, because I really want to make my country better and make everything else better in my power.
      ah868ah868 profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • I think that modern people should be multifaceted, therefore I like to study and develop in different spheres: music, design, philosophy, advertising and as well filmmaking.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I think that modern people should be multifaceted, therefore I would like to study and develop in different spheres like: music, design, philosophy, advertising and as well film-making. as well.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • I think that modern people should be multifaceted, therefore Iso I would like to study and develop in different spheres: music, design, philosophy, advertising and as welllso film-making.
      ah868ah868 profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5