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    • Essay.

    • These two texts raise the issue of the way we consume and the bad consequences this has on our environment.
    • This essay aims to summarize the salient ideas and assess them.
  • Nowadays, with the ever-growing technological development, mass consumption dwells in the heart of our modern societies.
    • It is so embedded in us that we could state " I consume so I am".
    • Unfortunately, the mere fact of buying a product is not without any consequences.
    • Moreover, the way we discard this product when this last does not work anymore, bears a critical impact as well.
    • Not only is the environment the first victim but also those who live in it such as animals and vegetal and of course ourselves, human beings.
    • Even though more and more consumers are aware of this problem and intend to minimize the negative impact thanks to recycling, the reality in this day and age, is that climate change and environmental issues have to be taken into consideration in a more drastic way, finding alternative ways of consuming.
    • To be at one with nature is an outstanding feeling and a lot of people do not want to lose it.
    • That is the reason why some choose to buy less but better quality products.
    • Admittedly, recycling could be a solution but as it is stated in the first text, it is not a sufficient one.The proof resides in the floating islands of plastic bags or in the mountains of flotsam and jetsam discarded by the sea that we can find hither and thither on different parts of the globe.
    • With the agreements recently made during the COP21, we can hope that governments will take the right decisions that became of paramount importance for the sake of our planet.
    • In the meantime, normal citizens can take actions to avoid an overconsumption of useless gadgets, choose biodegradable and reusable materials and adopt a sustainable way of consuming and living.

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  • câu 1
    • These two texts raise the issue of the way we consume and the bad consequences this has on our environment.
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    • These two texts raise the issue of the way weof our consumeption and the bad consequences of this has on our environment.
    • These two texts raise the issues ofn the way we consume and the badthings and its negative consequences this has on our environment.
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  • câu 3
    • Nowadays, with the ever-growing technological development, mass consumption dwells in the heart of our modern societies.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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  • câu 6
    • Moreover, the way we discard this product when this last does not work anymore, bears a critical impact as well.
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    • Moreover, the way we discard this product when this lasafter it does not work anymore, bears a critical impact as well.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • Not only is the environment the first victim but also those who live in it such as animals and vegetal and of course ourselves, human beings.
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    • Not only is the environment the firsta victim but also those who live in it such as animals and vegetal, plants, and of course ourselves, human beings.
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    • Not only is the environment the first victim but also those who live in it such as animals and vegetalplants and of course ourselves, human beings.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • Even though more and more consumers are aware of this problem and intend to minimize the negative impact thanks to recycling, the reality in this day and age, is that climate change and environmental issues have to be taken into consideration in a more drastic way, finding alternative ways of consuming.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Even though more and more consumers are aware of this problem and intend to minimize the negative impact thanks to recycling, the reality in this day and age, is that climate change and environmental issues have to be taken into consideration in a more drastic way, finding alternative ways of consumingption.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
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  • câu 11
    • Admittedly, recycling could be a solution but as it is stated in the first text, it is not a sufficient one.The proof resides in the floating islands of plastic bags or in the mountains of flotsam and jetsam discarded by the sea that we can find hither and thither on different parts of the globe.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Admittedly, recycling could be a solution but as it is stated in the first text, it is not a sufficient one.The proof resides in the floating islands of plastic bags or in the mountains of flotsam and jetsam discarded byin the sea that we can find hither and thither on different parts of the globe.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12
    • With the agreements recently made during the COP21, we can hope that governments will take the right decisions that became of paramount importance for the sake of our planet.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • With the agreements recently made during the COP21, we can hope that governments will take the right decisions that becaome of paramount importance for the sake of our planet.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • In the meantime, normal citizens can take actions to avoid an overconsumption of useless gadgets, choose biodegradable and reusable materials and adopt a sustainable way of consuming and living.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In the meantime, normal citizens can take actions to avoid an over-consumption of useless gadgets, choose biodegradable and reusable materials and adopt a sustainable way of consumingption and living.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13