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    • 18th May.

    • Today is Saturday, 18th May, Tomorrow is Sunday, 19th May.
    • Today I listen new music for me.
    • Today I listened some music that I don't known.
    • "Ma petite amie" give me her ipad then I saw that Xiomy's playlist, and now I'm listening some music, but in special a song, but not for the song, if not for the videoclip, its a man dancing and singing in the house, I feel identified with that, I love dancing and sing in house.
    • Today, in the neighbor's house was a party, and Xiomy felt a headache and she just bear with that, now she is very happy.
    • Today, I have a new cellphone and I need check it out how does it works?.
    • Last night, Xiomy watched a movie, and this morning she ask to me: somewhere else and other time, we had been girlfriend?, obviously yeah, but I don't understand why she said that.
    • Today I felt rare when in the park, we were sat and I said to Xiomy: "let's me bite your ear" and a boy said: "It's very sexy".

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    • "Ma petite amie" give me her ipad then I saw that Xiomy's playlist, and now I'm listening some music, but in special a song, but not for the song, if not for the videoclip, its a man dancing and singing in the house, I feel identified with that, I love dancing and sing in house.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • "Ma petite amie"my girlfriend giave me her ipPad thenand I saw that Xiomy's playlist, and. I am now I'm listening some music, but into a special a song, but not for the song, if not for thewith a videoclip, its of a man dancing and singing in thehis house,. I feelcan identifiedy with that, because I love to dancinge and sing in housmy own home.
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    • Today, in the neighbor's house was a party, and Xiomy felt a headache and she just bear with that, now she is very happy.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Today, in there was a party at my neighbor's house was a party, and Xiomy felthad a headache and she just bear with that, now she is very happywhich she tried to ignore. Fortunately she is feeling better now.
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    • Last night, Xiomy watched a movie, and this morning she ask to me: somewhere else and other time, we had been girlfriend?, obviously yeah, but I don't understand why she said that.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Last night, Xiomy watched a movie, and in this morning she ask to me:ed me if/whether somewhere else and other time, we had been girlfriend?, .¶I answered "obviously yeah", but I don't understand why she said that.
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    • Last night, Xiomy watched a movie, and this morning she ask to me: somewhere elseed me "in and other time, we had we been girlfriend?, s?"¶ I said "obviously yeah", but I don't understand why she saiasked that.
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    • Today I felt rare when in the park, we were sat and I said to Xiomy: "let's me bite your ear" and a boy said: "It's very sexy".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Today I feltt's rare when we are in the park, we were satitting together and I said to Xiomy: "let's me bite your ear" and a boy said: "It's very sexy".
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    • Today I felt raredifferent when in the park, we were sat. we sat down and I said to Xiomy: "let's me bite your ear" and a boy said: "It's very sexy".
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