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Text from Carpol - English

  • WHAT IS THE WORST INJUSTICE FOR YOU?

    • To start with this issue, it must be said that there are several kinds of injustices, unfortunately in the world.
  • As I see it, it is pretty difficult to choose the worst injustice.
    • In general, we feel “the worst injustice” whatever happens in childhood such as: poverty, starvation, diseases or all sort of exploitation.
  • Another important topic is “equality”.
    • It is well-known that the true equality doesn’t exist for instance there are racism, xenophobia, homophobia and chauvinism…among others.
    • Nowadays, it is not known exactly what micro-chauvinism is, but it is so dangerous and relevant than chauvinism, because we do not see it.
    • We must be very careful with our behaviour in order to vanish this kind of chauvinism.
    • In addition, there is a bigger injustice such as inequality between developed countries and developing countries.
    • As you can see, it is so difficult to select just one injustice.
    • The more aware of injustice we are, the better world we have.

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