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  • The expectation

    • Most of the hours of the day, most of the months of the year, the Sun had the city immersed in cement, up to beyond the mountains that made the city, a different and difficult place to find elsewhere, a Eden for people who lacked low houses, or geographically remote.
    • Two poles: luminosity and darkness, collided at seven o'clock in the afternoon, anchored in the darkness, escaped from himself.
    • His body was uncovered between the margins of the world, to which he merely acted.
    • The dream was looking for him, but he never heard the song of Sweet Breath.
    • One day, he went out on the balcony and looked at his hands.
    • She found them lit up in the middle of the night.
    • He discovered the Rays, twinkled in it, then, the night took a plunge; When he did, it was a balm.
    • He was the age everyone wants. I mean the 26.
    • He was tall, rather more than the average of his fellow-generation, the next to the father if not yet, the same.
  • At first glance, he looked sharp and stylized, though his figure was not of heterosexual orthodoxy: it was somewhat constrained of shoulders for his stature, which made it appear that the abdomen bulged, although it did not carry fat in that area or improper hips outgoing, there was a very long legs arose that did not know how to place when seated.
    • He had a little-populated moustache.
  • He showed some consumed and tangled curls, plus his distilled eyes and a dark blue as the deepest sea, his nose focused on the sky, he established the group of the most graceful.

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    • Most of the hours of the day, most of the months of the year, the Sun had the city immersed in cement, up to beyond the mountains that made the city, a different and difficult place to find elsewhere, a Eden for people who lacked low houses, or geographically remote.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Most of the hours of the day, most of the months of the year, the Ssun had the city immersed in cement, up to beyond the mountains that made the city, a different and difficult place to find elsewhere, an Eden for people who lacked low houses, or which were in geographically remote locations.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 2
    • Two poles: luminosity and darkness, collided at seven o'clock in the afternoon, anchored in the darkness, escaped from himself.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Two poles: luminosity and darkness, collided at seven o'clock in the afternoon, anchored in the darkness, and escaped from himitself.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • He was tall, rather more than the average of his fellow-generation, the next to the father if not yet, the same.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • He was tall, rather more than the average of his fellow-generation people, the next to the father if not yet, the same.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • At first glance, he looked sharp and stylized, though his figure was not of heterosexual orthodoxy: it was somewhat constrained of shoulders for his stature, which made it appear that the abdomen bulged, although it did not carry fat in that area or improper hips outgoing, there was a very long legs arose that did not know how to place when seated.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • He showed some consumed and tangled curls, plus his distilled eyes and a dark blue as the deepest sea, his nose focused on the sky, he established the group of the most graceful.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12