Text from Juliya1235 - English
Graffiti is an art form that should be respected and admired
- The issue of graffiti has always aroused heated debates.
- Some people think that it is vandalism, while others claim that it is a form of contemporary art.
- From my point of view, graffiti is a new style of visual art.
- Firstly, thanks to graffiti young people can release themselves in art.
- It gives them an opportunity for developing as an artist in their future.
- Secondly, I think that buildings with graffiti look interesting and beautiful.
- They can become sights of a city.
- Finally, nowadays young people do not interest in art because they consider that it is outdated and uninteresting.
- But they like graffiti.
- So it can attach them to art.
- However, some people believe that graffiti is a firm of vandalism.
- In their view, people, who draw graffiti on walls of buildings, involve the rights of private property, and it should be punished and forbidden.
- However, I disagree with the above opinion.
- I am convinced that people, who draw graffiti, do not commit any crimes.
- Nowadays they often get orderings on graffiti.
- So it do not involve any rights of other human beings.
- In conclusion, I believe that graffiti will be exhibited in museums in the future, and there will be graffiti courses.
- Juliya1235April 201770% GOOD (10 votes)
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