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    • Graffiti is an art form that should be respected and admired

  • The issue of graffiti has always aroused heated debates.
    • Some people think that it is vandalism, while others claim that it is a form of contemporary art.
  • From my point of view, graffiti is a new style of visual art.
    • Firstly, thanks to graffiti young people can release themselves in art.
    • It gives them an opportunity for developing as an artist in their future.
  • Secondly, I think that buildings with graffiti look interesting and beautiful.
    • They can become sights of a city.
    • Finally, nowadays young people do not interest in art because they consider that it is outdated and uninteresting.
  • But they like graffiti.
    • So it can attach them to art.
    • However, some people believe that graffiti is a firm of vandalism.
    • In their view, people, who draw graffiti on walls of buildings, involve the rights of private property, and it should be punished and forbidden.
  • However, I disagree with the above opinion.
    • I am convinced that people, who draw graffiti, do not commit any crimes.
  • Nowadays they often get orderings on graffiti.
    • So it do not involve any rights of other human beings.
  • In conclusion, I believe that graffiti will be exhibited in museums in the future, and there will be graffiti courses.

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