Nhờ sửa bài giúp

Văn bản từ lamishk - English

    • just help me and correct the tax

    • good greeting..
  • This is not a complaint, not an official letter, but a brief explanation of what happened to us.
    • we are the trainees 111, 111 and 111 We were selected to join the course "International Training Program On Solar Energy Technologies and Applications .
    • 1 -lately we told 222 that we would not like to travel on Oman air line Because my friends told us that it was not cooperating company But our request was rejected ,and The Indian embassy booked the tickets on Oman airlines in 28/1/2017 from Beirut Airport and the first flight was at 6:20 pm. 2 –Mrs.
  • 222 gave the ticket on Wednesday 25/1/2017 at 3:00 p.m.
    • and he told her that there was an Expected storm on Thursday 26/1/2017 .
  • 3- On Friday morning the storm started and closed the international road so it was impossible to travel at 27/1/2017 because of the icy road.
    • 4- Although this hard and dangerous conditions we started our trip at 6:00 a.m. on Saturday 28-Jan 2017 but the international road Damascus- Beiurt was closed and we suffered a lot During the trip to the air port.
    • 5- finally we arrived to the air port an hour before the first flight , Immediately we tried to boarding but the Oman airlines prevented us because they said we have to do boarding before two or three hours, then we told them that we were ready to travel without our luggage but they refused .
    • 6- So Immediately we called 222 and Asked her for help but she did not do anything for us .
    • 7- We tried to adjust booking to the next flight at 12:45 AM and we accepted to pay the tax of 80 $ but the Oman airlines office told us that “we should adjust the booking in Damascus at Orient Gate office or pay a new ticket worth $ 300 ” , So we phoned the Orient Gate office and asked for adjust booking and we told Orient Gate office that we were ready to pay the tax but Orient Gate office refused and said that “the Oman airlines office in the airport is responsible to adjust booking and we had another option to pay a new ticket worth $ 300 ”.and we were not able to pay a new ticket .
    • 8 -We called the emergency number "0222" but no one answered and we called Dr.O.S22a22y and he told us that he was retired and gave us the number of current director We called The director Shri S. K.
  • Singh +22222 and asked for help .
    • 9- We stayed all the night in Beirut airport and we were hurt tired and sad.
  • We were questioned by the security of the Lebanese airport about the reason of being in the airport for a long time .
    • We were treated badly in the air port Because we are Syrians .
  • 10 -On Sunday 29/1/2017 we came back to Damascus.
    • 11 -On Monday we went to the Indian embassy and explained what happened to us to Mr. M11a , after that Mrs. 11a called us and asked us to pay 252000 pounds to Orient Gate office (84000 Syrian pounds For each person).
    • 12 the official in Orient Gate met Mr. 111 and told him that “We were lying and we were not ready to pay the tax” and we deny this . after that the embassy sent a formal letter(no.
    • 111) asking us to pay 213000 Syrian pounds (71000 Syrian pounds For each person).
    • 13- It cost us 200 $ to travel from Damascus to Beirut and 200 $ to come Back to Damascus and about 50 $ to do the contacts in Beirut airport And our salary is just 50 $ per month and We suffer from the harsh conditions of war .
    • 14 We are so sorry for not attending this course ..we tried and tried to do something but we didn't get any help ..We are very sad to lost this important course that is Learning about solar energy is useful to us in our work.
    • 15 We have always dreamed of traveling to India, visiting the Taj Mahal and learning Indian civilization where we personally adore Indian films and Indian culture.
  • Unfortunately our dreams were shattered.
  • 16 We hope that we will be compensated for a subsequent training course as we have been punished a lot .
  • 17 Some of the airlines told us that booking the plane tickets was a non-professional reservation where the tax could have been just $ 50.
  • 18 We hope that the Embassy will forgive us from the Financial penalty. Best regards

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

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    • we are the trainees 111, 111 and 111 We were selected to join the course "International Training Program On Solar Energy Technologies and Applications .
      Bầu chọn ngay!

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      We are the trainees 111, 111 and 111. We were selected to join the course "International Training Program On Solar Energy Technologies and Applications .
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • 1 -lately we told 222 that we would not like to travel on Oman air line Because my friends told us that it was not cooperating company But our request was rejected ,and The Indian embassy booked the tickets on Oman airlines in 28/1/2017 from Beirut Airport and the first flight was at 6:20 pm. 2 –Mrs.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 1 -lLately we told 222 that we would not like to travel on-board Oman air line Bbecause my friends told us that it was not a cooperating company. But our request was rejected ,and The Indian embassy booked the tickets on Oman airlines in 28/1/2017 from Beirut Airport and the first flight was at 6:20 pm. 2 –Mrs.
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    • 3- On Friday morning the storm started and closed the international road so it was impossible to travel at 27/1/2017 because of the icy road.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • 4- Although this hard and dangerous conditions we started our trip at 6:00 a.m. on Saturday 28-Jan 2017 but the international road Damascus- Beiurt was closed and we suffered a lot During the trip to the air port.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 4- AlthoughInspite of this hard and dangerous conditions we started our trip at 6:00 a.m. on Saturday 28-Jan 2017 but the international road Damascus- Beiurut was closed and we suffered a lot Dduring the trip to the air port.
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    • 5- finally we arrived to the air port an hour before the first flight , Immediately we tried to boarding but the Oman airlines prevented us because they said we have to do boarding before two or three hours, then we told them that we were ready to travel without our luggage but they refused .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 5- fFinally we arrived ato the air port an hour before the first flight ,¶
      Immediately we tried to board
      ing but the Oman airlines officials prevented us
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      B
      ecause they said that we have to do boarding before two or three hours, t. Then we told them that we were ready to travel without our luggage but they refused .
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    • 7- We tried to adjust booking to the next flight at 12:45 AM and we accepted to pay the tax of 80 $ but the Oman airlines office told us that “we should adjust the booking in Damascus at Orient Gate office or pay a new ticket worth $ 300 ” , So we phoned the Orient Gate office and asked for adjust booking and we told Orient Gate office that we were ready to pay the tax but Orient Gate office refused and said that “the Oman airlines office in the airport is responsible to adjust booking and we had another option to pay a new ticket worth $ 300 ”.and we were not able to pay a new ticket .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 7- We tried to adjust booking to the next flight at 12:45 AM and we
      accepted to pay the tax of 80 $ but the Oman airlines office told us that “we should adjust the booking in Damascus at Orient Gate office or pay a new ticket worth $ 300 ” , So we phoncalled the Orient Gate office and asked for adjusting the booking and we told Orient Gate office that we were ready to pay the tax but Orient Gate office refused and said that “the Oman airlines office in the airport is responsible to adjust booking and we had another option to pabuy a new ticket worth $ 300 ”.and we were not able to pay for a new ticket .
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    • 8 -We called the emergency number "0222" but no one answered and we called Dr.O.S22a22y and he told us that he was retired and gave us the number of current director We called The director Shri S. K.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 8 -We called the emergency number "0222" but no one answered and we called Dr.O.S22a22y and he told us that he was retired and gave us the number of current director We called Tthe director Shri S. K.
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    • We were questioned by the security of the Lebanese airport about the reason of being in the airport for a long time .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • 11 -On Monday we went to the Indian embassy and explained what happened to us to Mr. M11a , after that Mrs. 11a called us and asked us to pay 252000 pounds to Orient Gate office (84000 Syrian pounds For each person).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 11 -On Monday we went to the Indian embassy and explained what happened to us to Mr. M11a , after that Mrs. 11a called us and asked us to pay 252000 pounds to Orient Gate office (84000 Syrian pounds Ffor each person).
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    • 12 the official in Orient Gate met Mr. 111 and told him that “We were lying and we were not ready to pay the tax” and we deny this . after that the embassy sent a formal letter(no.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 12 tThe official in Orient Gate met Mr. 111 and told him that “We were lying and we were not ready to pay the tax” and we denyied this . after that the embassy sent a formal letter(no.
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    • 13- It cost us 200 $ to travel from Damascus to Beirut and 200 $ to come Back to Damascus and about 50 $ to do the contacts in Beirut airport And our salary is just 50 $ per month and We suffer from the harsh conditions of war .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 13- It cost us 200 $ to travel from Damascus to Beirut and 200 $ to come
      B
      back to Damascus and about 50 $ to do the contacts in Beirut airport. And our salary is just 50 $ per month and Wwe suffered from the harsh conditions of war .
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    • 14 We are so sorry for not attending this course ..we tried and tried to do something but we didn't get any help ..We are very sad to lost this important course that is Learning about solar energy is useful to us in our work.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 14 We are so sorry for not attending this course ..we tried and tried to
      do something but we didn't get any help ..We are very sad to loste this important course that is Learning about solar energy which is useful to us in our work.
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    • 15 We have always dreamed of traveling to India, visiting the Taj Mahal and learning Indian civilization where we personally adore Indian films and Indian culture.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 15 We have always dreamedt of traveling to India, visiting the Taj Mahal and learning about Indian civilization where we personally adore Indian films and Indian culture.
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    • 17 Some of the airlines told us that booking the plane tickets was a non-professional reservation where the tax could have been just $ 50.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 26ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 26
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