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- My city and thoughts about it. Topic for a lesson
- 18 years ago it so happened that i was born here, in the city naned Aktobe, in Kazakstan.
- Unfortunatelly, for all time i've never travelled outside the area.
- Honestly, I don't like my city, here are always dirty, dusty, hurrying fussy people on the streets intermixed with idle insolent youth.

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- 18 years ago it so happened that i was born here, in the city naned Aktobe, in Kazakstan.
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- Unfortunatelly, for all time i've never travelled outside the area.
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- Unfortunatelly, for ~~all time i~~the entire time I have lived here, I've never travelled outside ~~the~~of my area.
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- Unfortunatelly, for all the time iI have lived here, I've never travelled outside ~~the~~of my domestic area.
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- Unfortunatelly, ~~for all time i've n~~I haven't ever travelled outside ~~the area~~of my area since I've been here.
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- ~~Unfortunatelly, for all time i~~Sadly, I've never travelled outside the area I was born in.
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- Honestly, I don't like my city, here are always dirty, dusty, hurrying fussy people on the streets intermixed with idle insolent youth.
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- HTo be honestly, I don't like my city~~, here are~~. It's always dirty, and dusty, h~~urrying fussy people on the streets intermixed with~~ere. People are always in a hurry, rushing around on the streets, and there are many idle, insolent youths.
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