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  • Studying Abroad

    • Many students chose attend university in other countries instead of local colleges.
  • It is a brave decision since those students have to face challenges like a different language and culture.
    • However, there are benefits in choosing to study abroad which can compensate the difficulties.
    • It is not every country that had developed or choose developed the same majors because of cultural or economic issues.
    • It is completely understandable a student who move to other country in order to study something that he cannot find in his own country.
  • As an example, I can use my own case.
    • I want to study screenwriter; although there are a few courses about it here in Brazil, there is no degree and the courses are not really good, at least, not so good as it is in other places.
    • Secondly, study in another place it is a chance to meet new people and a different culture.
  • It can be challenging indeed, but it can also be funny; a chance to grownup.
    • When people discover that the world it is not only they home country, they tend to see the world on a less biased way.
    • Thirdly, it is a chance to share your own culture throughout the world.
    • A foreigner view can, sometimes, be exactly what some institutions need; a point-of-view from a different place, with a different history.
    • A student from a third world country can enrich classes discussions about the history of his country, and vice-versa.
    • Students from developed countries who study on countries in development can change the way those countries are saw.
    • In conclusion, there are several reasons which can be appointed that can lead a student chose to study away from home.
    • If a student has how to do it and is willing to face the difficulties of a new language and a new culture, he does not have to think twice.
  • Take the opportunity and conquer the world.

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    • It is not every country that had developed or choose developed the same majors because of cultural or economic issues.
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    • It is not every country that had developedNot all countries offer or choose developedto offer the same majors because of cultural or economic issues.
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    • It is completely understandable a student who move to other country in order to study something that he cannot find in his own country.
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    • It is completely understandable for a student whto move to another country in order to study something that he cannot find in his own country.
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    • I want to study screenwriter; although there are a few courses about it here in Brazil, there is no degree and the courses are not really good, at least, not so good as it is in other places.
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    • I want to study screenwriter; although there are a few courses about it here in Brazil, there is no degree and the courses are not really good, at least, not aso good as it is in other places.
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    • When people discover that the world it is not only they home country, they tend to see the world on a less biased way.
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    • When people discover that the world it is not only theyir home country, they tend to see the world oin a less biased way.
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    • A foreigner view can, sometimes, be exactly what some institutions need; a point-of-view from a different place, with a different history.
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    • A foreigner's view can, sometimes, be exactly what some institutions need;- a point-of-view from a different place, with a different history.
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    • A student from a third world country can enrich classes discussions about the history of his country, and vice-versa.
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    • A student from a third world country can enrich classes discussions about the history of histheir country, and vice-versa.
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    • Students from developed countries who study on countries in development can change the way those countries are saw.
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    • Students from developed countries who study on countries in developmentin developed countries can change the way those countries are saween.
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    • In conclusion, there are several reasons which can be appointed that can lead a student chose to study away from home.
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    • In conclusion, there are several reasons which can be appointed that can lead a student to chose to study away from home.
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    • If a student has how to do it and is willing to face the difficulties of a new language and a new culture, he does not have to think twice.
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    • If a student has the know how to do it and is willing to face the difficulties of a new language and a new culture, he does not have to think twice.
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