Düzeltmeler

fitti'den mesaj - English

  • Composition

    • Personally, it seems to me that the human being should firstly respect other people and secondly other world's creatures, like animals.
  • It does not mean that animals should be treated badly, but people must consider them like animals and not like humans.
    • To begin with, some people treat animals in an exaggerated way, for instance feeding them with the best food they can afford or buying unnecessary things that their animals would never use, instead of helping people that suffer hanger or health problems.
    • What is more, other people treat their pets like humans, forcing them to wear inappropiate clothes or to live in an unnatural way.
  • At the same time, there are many business companies that exploit animals just to produce clothes or bags.
    • In this case animals are considered as an economic source to capitalize on.
    • In addition to this, the increasing number of zoos and circus has caused a growth in animal's bad treatments, because in those places they have no respect for them and let them live in extreme bad conditions.
    • To sum up, animals should live in their natural environment, so that they can express their istinct and should be treated with respect for their nature and their needs, without exaggeration.

Lütfen, Her cümleyi düzeltmek için yardım edin ! - English

  • Başlık
  • cümle 1
    • Personally, it seems to me that the human being should firstly respect other people and secondly other world's creatures, like animals.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Personally, it seems to me that the human being should firstly respect other people and secondly other world's creatures of the world, like animals.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 1YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1
  • cümle 2
  • cümle 3
    • To begin with, some people treat animals in an exaggerated way, for instance feeding them with the best food they can afford or buying unnecessary things that their animals would never use, instead of helping people that suffer hanger or health problems.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • To begin with, some people treat animals in an exaggerated way, f.For instance feeding them with the best food they can afford or buying unnecessary things that their animals would never use, instead of helping people that suffer hafrom hunger or health problems.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
  • cümle 4
    • What is more, other people treat their pets like humans, forcing them to wear inappropiate clothes or to live in an unnatural way.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • What is more, other people treat their pets like humans, forcing them to wear inappropriate clothes or to live in an unnatural way.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 4YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
  • cümle 5
  • cümle 6
  • cümle 7
    • In addition to this, the increasing number of zoos and circus has caused a growth in animal's bad treatments, because in those places they have no respect for them and let them live in extreme bad conditions.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • In addition to this, the increasing number of zoos and circus has caused a growth in animal's bad treatments, because in those places they have no respect for them and let themy live in extreme bad conditions.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 7YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7
  • cümle 8
    • To sum up, animals should live in their natural environment, so that they can express their istinct and should be treated with respect for their nature and their needs, without exaggeration.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • To sum it up, animals should live in their natural environment, so that they can express their ibasic instincts and should be treated with respect for their nature and their needs, without any exaggeration.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 8YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 8