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HIII guys...I worte this application which is so important to me..You know I may have new job and even a new life if i have a good application..So please help me..if you have any sugesstions for this please tell me..you may save a life,,Thank you so muchhhhh Dear Sir, Basing on your Company’s information, I know that your company is looking for the new staffs .

I would like to put an application for this possition .

I graduated from Ha Noi AgriCultural University .

My major is food technology, I had more than 1 year experience as a QC Supervisor, with strong ability to monitor production process, inspect materials and products for defects during manufacturing operation, and final packing process.

I am a well organized, hardworking person.

I have worked in a dynamic and environment where Teamwork spirit and communication is one of the most important factor which helps me to create the belief , communication skill and flexble ability, so i can join to many different possions.

I am sure that my educational background , working experience and enthusiasm will be an asser to Your Company.

These are the qualities, experience that you’re looking for this position.

I look forward to hearing from soon.