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    • Opinion essay

    • In many Western countries people love their pets and they pamper them enough.
    • But second part of people think that it isn't worth to spend a lot of money for animals.
    • In my opinion, the pet's owner should buy the best things for it's friend.
  • If you love your pet you will care about it.
    • Firstly, house pets are good friends and they can save you from sadness and boredom.
    • Secondly, buying a expensive things for your pet can refect on your prestige.
    • On the other hand, costly collars and pet clothes not worth your profit.
    • Spending a bigger part of your money for pet is not very clever.
    • To sum up, people who buy the pets should keep them worthly and they should be responsible for their little friends

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