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Check my opinion essay

• THEME: The Internet is the greatest time-waster.

• It cannot be denied that the Internet plays a great role in our life.

• Some people think we waste our time because of it.

• However,others claim that it is the most useful tool mankind ever created and we just need to learn how to use it properly.

• So,who is right?

• In my judgment the world wide web is not a time-waster if people are taught time management.

• The Internet is so important in our daily life that we cannot imagine ourselves without it.

• Firstly,thanks to it,we get quick acess to necessary information wherever and whenever.

• Secondly, the Internet helps us improve our English because we can practise it with any foreigner.

• But there are people who think that we just spend precious time on computer games and social networking sites using the Internet.

• There is lot of truth in what they say but I believe that such people do not understand that the Internet does us the good if we know how to budget our time the right way and avoid such entertainments.

• In conclusion,I would like to say that we cannot exist without the Internet.

• If we use time management, it can easily become our friend