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    • We're told to strive for some sort of ideal life, which includes getting a good job, being kind to everyone, finding a partner, getting married, having a couple kids, living in a quiet neighborhood in a nice big house..
  • People are being used by those in power "like a pig in a cage on antibiotics"--being pacified with things like new phones and cool gadgets and houses while being sucked dry.
  • This boring, "perfect" life foisted upon us by some higher powers (not spiritual, but political, economic) Is this real life..
  • Is there seemingly any way out except death.

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    • We're told to strive for some sort of ideal life, which includes getting a good job, being kind to everyone, finding a partner, getting married, having a couple kids, living in a quiet neighborhood in a nice big house..
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    • We're told to strive for some sort of ideal life, which includes getting a good job, being kind to everyone, finding a partner, getting married, having a couple of kids, and living in a quiet neighborhood in a nice big house..
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    • People are being used by those in power "like a pig in a cage on antibiotics"--being pacified with things like new phones and cool gadgets and houses while being sucked dry.
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    • This boring, "perfect" life foisted upon us by some higher powers (not spiritual, but political, economic) Is this real life..
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