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- Hi, my name isEmanuel, I'm from Mexico and I'm eighteen years old I need to practice my English because I wanna study cinematography and is an indispensable requirement speak English Please help and I'll help you with your Spanish Contact me in my email: ecb_830@hotmail.com or in my Facebook

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- Hi, my name isEmanuel, I'm from Mexico and I'm eighteen years old I need to practice my English because I wanna study cinematography and is an indispensable requirement speak English Please help and I'll help you with your Spanish Contact me in my email: ecb_830@hotmail.com or in my Facebook
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- Hi, my name is Emanuel, I'm from Mexico and I'm eighteen years old. ¶
  I need to practice my English because I wannat to study cinematography and is an indispensable requirement for this is to be able to speak English.¶
  Please help me and I'll help you with your Spanish ¶
  Contact me in my email: ecb_830@hotmail.com or in my Facebook
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