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- some thing abaut me
- so i'm 36 years old ,i came from to Equator , i lived in italy for 10 years , and 5 years ago i stayng in france , i came back to school , and thi is my second year in the university , i took bi-langue italy and english , but i can't forward in english .

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- so i'm 36 years old ,i came from to Equator , i lived in italy for 10 years , and 5 years ago i stayng in france , i came back to school , and thi is my second year in the university , i took bi-langue italy and english , but i can't forward in english .
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- sSo i'm 36 years old , i came from to Equator ~~, i~~. I lived in iItaly for 10 years , and 5 years ago i staynged in fFrance ~~, i~~. I came back to s~~chool~~ tudying, and this is my second year in the university ~~, i~~. I took bi-langueage course - italyian and english , but i can't ~~forwar~~succeed in eEnglish .
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- ~~so i'~~I am 36 years old ,i. I came from ~~to Eq~~Ecuatdor ~~, i~~and lived in iItaly for about 10 years ~~, and~~. Since 5 years ~~ago i~~I am staying in fFrance ~~, i c~~. I ame back to my school ,now and this is my second year in the university ~~, i~~. I took ~~bi-~~two langu~~e italy and english , but i can't forward in e~~age courses. One is Italian and the other is English. Italian is fine, but i am having difficulty to progress with my English . .
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- so i'm 36 years old ,i caome from to Eqcuatdor , i lived in italy for 10 years , and 5 years ago i staynged in fFrance , i came back to school , and this is my second year in the university , i took ~~bi-~~two langu~~e italy~~ages Italian and eEnglish , but i can't ~~forward in~~improve my english .
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- ~~so i~~Hi I'm 36 years old ,iand I caome from to Equator ~~, i~~. I lived in iItaly for 10 ¶years , and 5 years ago ~~i stayng~~I lived in fFrance ~~, i came~~. I went back to school , and this is my second year in the university ~~, i~~. I took ~~bi-~~2 langu~~e italy~~ages, Italian and eEnglish , but iI can't ~~forward~~improve in eEnglish .
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- ~~so i~~I'm 36 years old ,i. I came from to Equator ~~, i~~and I lived in iItaly for 10 years ~~, and~~. 5 years ago iI staynged in fFrance ~~, i came~~and went back to school ~~, and thi~~ . This my second year inat the university ~~, i~~. I took bi-laingu~~e italy~~al classes in Italian and eEnglish , but ~~i can't forward~~I'm not fluent in eEnglish .
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- ~~so i~~I'm 36 years old ,i.I caome from to Equatdor ~~, i~~. I have lived in iItaly for 10 years ~~, and 5 years ago i stayng in france , i came~~and moved to France 5 years ago. I went back to school , and this is my second year inat the university ~~, i~~. I took bi-laingu~~e italy~~al classes in Italian and eEnglish , but iI c~~an't forward in e~~ouldn't improve my English .
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