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- One person ran into a cave because some people wanted to catch him.
- When they found him around there, he was afraid.
- Suddenly, he felt cold on his arm.
- He saw a spider.
- He planed to kill it but he didn’t.
- The spider ran to the gate of that cave and sewed a net.
- Those people ran to that cave and saw a new net.
- They thought there isn’t any people in there so they ran away.
- So sometimes, if we treated kindly with someone is helping ourselves, too.
- misangocle08022004January 2017Vote now!
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