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  • Please help me to correct this story. Thank you so much.

  • One person ran into a cave because some people wanted to catch him.
  • When they found him around there, he was afraid.
  • Suddenly, he felt cold on his arm.
  • He saw a spider.
    • He planed to kill it but he didn’t.
    • The spider ran to the gate of that cave and sewed a net.
    • Those people ran to that cave and saw a new net.
  • They thought there isn’t any people in there so they ran away.
    • So sometimes, if we treated kindly with someone is helping ourselves, too.

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