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My City
- In my city,the battle becomes more violent from every side.A fighter imagine that he takes his own,thus he killed every person whom he sees.
- And,a blood spreads in his soul before his body without he realize it.

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- In my city,the battle becomes more violent from every side.A fighter imagine that he takes his own,thus he killed every person whom he sees.
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- In my city,the battle becomes more violent from every side. A fighter imagines that he ~~takes his own,t~~may killed by others. Thus he killeds every person whom he sees.
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- And,a blood spreads in his soul before his body without he realize it.
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- And,a blood spreads in his soul ~~before~~and his body ~~without~~before he realizes it.
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