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  • My City

    • In my city,the battle becomes more violent from every side.A fighter imagine that he takes his own,thus he killed every person whom he sees.
    • And,a blood spreads in his soul before his body without he realize it.
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    • In my city,the battle becomes more violent from every side.A fighter imagine that he takes his own,thus he killed every person whom he sees.
    • In my city,the battle becomes more violent from every side. A fighter imagines that he takes his own,tmay killed by others. Thus he killeds every person whom he sees.
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