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Text from Oceane30760 - English

  • The USA , my dream.

    • I would like live in the USA , more particularly the state of Florida because I'd like went to Miami.
    • This city is most beautiful , with the beach and the ocean.
    • I would like went there with my boyfriend , it's our dream.
    • But I do improve my english so i will go in a few years.

МОЛЯ, ПОМОГНЕТЕ ДА КОРИГИГИРАМЕ ВСЯКО ИЗРЕЧЕНИЕ! - English