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The USA , my dream.
- I would like live in the USA , more particularly the state of Florida because I'd like went to Miami.
- This city is most beautiful , with the beach and the ocean.
- I would like went there with my boyfriend , it's our dream.
- But I do improve my english so i will go in a few years.

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- I would like live in the USA , more particularly the state of Florida because I'd like went to Miami.
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- I would like live in the USA , more particularly in the state of Florida because I'd like ~~went~~to go to Miami.
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- I would like to live in the USA , more particularly in the state of Florida because I'd like ~~went~~to go to Miami.
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- This city is most beautiful , with the beach and the ocean.
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- This city is the most beautiful , with the beaches and the ocean.
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- This city is ~~most~~very beautiful , with the beach and the ocean.
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- I would like went there with my boyfriend , it's our dream.
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- But I do improve my english so i will go in a few years.
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- But I dowill improve my english so ~~i will~~I can go in a few years. ¶
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