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  • Once upon a time, there was a king.
    • He hold a contest to find an artist can draw a peaceful picture.
    • Many artists drew and waited for the result from the king.
    • The king looked for all the picture and he chose 2 pictures in all of them.
    • But he must to choose the best peaceful picture.
  • In the first picture, there was a peaceful lake.
    • He could see some mountains reflected in the lake.
    • The blue sky with white clouds.
  • Everyone looked at that picture and they loved it.
    • In the second picture, There was a big mountains.
  • The sky was as grey as a storm.
    • Under the mountains was a waterfall.
    • But when the king looked carefully, he saw a big bird doing a nest.
    • It sat peaceful in the nest.
    • What was the picture did the king choose?
    • He chose the second picture and said: “Because peaceful isn’t mean you live in a place didn’t have noise and problems.
    • Peaceful means live between all of them, you still feel peaceful in your heart.
    • That is the true peaceful.”

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