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Hello!
Hi!
- I am Elisabetta, I am 17 years old and I live in Rovigo, a small town near Venise.
- I am dancing, chatting online with my friends and listening to music.
- I do not like going to school, eating a lot or studing English.

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MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

Title
- Hello!
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hi!
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I am Elisabetta, I am 17 years old and I live in Rovigo, a small town near Venise.
  Undi sekarang!
- ~~I am~~My name is Elisabetta, I am 17 years old and I live in Rovigo, a small town near Venise.
  Voculus Ulasan
  
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- I am Elisabetta, I am 17 years old and I live in Rovigo, a small town near Venisce.
  Weylin Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I am dancing, chatting online with my friends and listening to music.
  Undi sekarang!
- I amlike dancing, chatting online with my friends and listening to music.
  Voculus Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- I do not like going to school, eating a lot or studing English.
  Undi sekarang!
- I do not like going to school, eating a lot or studying English.
  Arianselo Ulasan
  
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- I do non't like ~~going~~to go to school, ~~eating a lot or~~ stud~~ing~~y English. or eat too much.
  Voculus Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4