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About my new apartment
Dear Aunty Kate, I thought I'd write you a letter.
First of all, I moved my apartment.
As you can see, on the top of the letter is my new address.
My new girlfriend, her name is Kristin by the way, created the rooms very good.
If you want you can visit us all the time.
The reason why we moved is not only to live together, but also I got a new job.
That's all for now.
Love, Christoph

wintitorpedoDecember 2012Bầu chọn ngay!
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- About my new apartment
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câu 1
- Dear Aunty Kate, I thought I'd write you a letter.
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câu 2
- First of all, I moved my apartment.
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câu 3
- As you can see, on the top of the letter is my new address.
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câu 4
- My new girlfriend, her name is Kristin by the way, created the rooms very good.
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câu 5
- If you want you can visit us all the time.
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câu 6
- The reason why we moved is not only to live together, but also I got a new job.
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câu 7
- That's all for now.
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câu 8
- Love, Christoph
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