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  • THERE IS ONE CURE FOR OBESITY AND ONE ONLY: EAT LESS.
    • IT'S THAT OR THE FATNESS EPIDEMIC WILL KILL MORE THAN SPANISH FLU Scientists and politicians believe in the mistaken fact that food suppliers claim : obesity is due to a lack of excercices.
    • The real cause is eating too many calories by eating high-sugar or high-carbohydrate diet, but this kind of food yield profit.
  • Nevertheless, fat can prevent us from eating too much.
    • On the contrary, carbohydrates and sugar give the sensation that the stomach did not had a full meal, which lead to eat more.
    • A healthy meal is not tasty enough, that's why food industries add a lot of sugar.
    • Genetic, psychological and metabolic factors are not the causes of obesity, however all bodies react differently to a same diet.
    • Even a lot of excercices can not burn a lot of calories.
    • There are few ways to avoid the deadly consequences of obesity : tiny portions and healthy food.
    • At least, if healthy food is too expensive to be bought, the bad food should be reduced.
    • Dietitians and psychiatrists will help people to learn thow to eat and cook proprely.
    • A simple obesity strategy should be planned saying that obesity could be deadful but is free to cure.

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    • IT'S THAT OR THE FATNESS EPIDEMIC WILL KILL MORE THAN SPANISH FLU Scientists and politicians believe in the mistaken fact that food suppliers claim : obesity is due to a lack of excercices.
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    • IT'S THAT, OR THE FATNESS EPIDEMIC WILL KILL MORE THAN THE SPANISH FLU.

      Scientists and politicians       mistakenly believe in the mistaken fact thatclaim made by food suppliers claim :: that obesity is due to a lack of excercicese.
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    • The real cause is eating too many calories by eating high-sugar or high-carbohydrate diet, but this kind of food yield profit.
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    • The real cause is eatconsuming too many calories by eatingin a high-sugar or high-carbohydrate diet, but this. But it's these kinds of food that yield profit.
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    • On the contrary, carbohydrates and sugar give the sensation that the stomach did not had a full meal, which lead to eat more.
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    • On the contrary, cCarbohydrates and sugar do not give the sensation that the stomach did not hadtomach sensations of a full meal, which leads to eat moreovereating.
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    • Genetic, psychological and metabolic factors are not the causes of obesity, however all bodies react differently to a same diet.
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    • Genetic, psychological and metabolic factors are not the causes of obesity, h. However, all bodies react differently to a same diet.
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    • There are few ways to avoid the deadly consequences of obesity : tiny portions and healthy food.
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    • There are fewa couple ways to avoid the deadly consequences of obesity : tiny portionservings and healthy food.
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    • A simple obesity strategy should be planned saying that obesity could be deadful but is free to cure.
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    • A simplen obesity strategy should be planned saytating that obesity could beis deadfuly but is free to cure.
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