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    • Favourite piece of writing

    • I prefer poem writing amoung all type of writing, because poem has this beautiful way to show feelings thanks to stylistc devices, and lyrical words that we use.
    • It permit us to be out of the ordinary, 'cause simple sentence like "I have feelings for you" or "I love you" is not allowed.
    • It's like a game words, in which the reader need to guess what are the understatements.
    • It can deliver us of barriers at speaking, in which in front of someone, sometimes we couldn't able to use proper words at the right moment when we are very emotioned.
    • So, poem help us to say what is hided in darkest depth of our soul, Often, it express more than what we want to say thanks to the power of words.

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  • câu 1
    • I prefer poem writing amoung all type of writing, because poem has this beautiful way to show feelings thanks to stylistc devices, and lyrical words that we use.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I prefer poem writing poem amoung all types of writing, because poem has this beautiful way to show feelings thanks to stylistc devices, and the lyrical words that we use.
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  • câu 2
    • It permit us to be out of the ordinary, 'cause simple sentence like "I have feelings for you" or "I love you" is not allowed.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It permits us to be out of the ordinary, 'cause simple sentences like "I have feelings for you" or "I love you" is not allowed.
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    • It can deliver us of barriers at speaking, in which in front of someone, sometimes we couldn't able to use proper words at the right moment when we are very emotioned.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It can deliver us ofmake us break the barriers atwhile speaking, in whichwhere in front of someone, sometimes we couldn'are not able to use proper words at the right moment when we are very emotionedal.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • So, poem help us to say what is hided in darkest depth of our soul, Often, it express more than what we want to say thanks to the power of words.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • So, poems help us to say what is hideden in the darkest depths of our soul,. Often, it express more than what we want to say, thanks to the power of words.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5