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Văn bản từ MEESO - English

  • Questions

    • 1- I want to collaborate and engage with delegates and organization that working for social change and gender equality.
  • I feel that I have the skills required for this opportunity, and I will be very happy to contribute.
    • 2-• I believe it is meaningful experience because it makes me connected with a growing network of peers from around the world working for development and social change.
  • It develops values and attitudes that nurture a culture of peace.
    • Also, it develops my vision and leadership approaches which lead to innovation.
    • It will be a great opportunity to explore efforts to create and strengthen community-driven development for policy change.
    • 3- My country facing a lot of issue related to youth development, Finance, democracy, gender equality and achieve social justice.
    • There are gap between that what government do and what are youth seeking and hoping? .
    • 4-We are targeting a youth between 18-25 because they represented the large scale in Egypt.
    • So, we collaborate with student Activities in the other universities to raise awareness about gender equality and achieve social justice.
    • We collaborate with Youth Arab voice to make debate about this issues and let everyone express about his views.
    • We are hoping to organize workshops to youth interested to increase the slices that we are working it.
    • 5-I participated in international Women's Day and it was be the beginning to meet peers interested in gender equality.
    • I contributed in "He For She" Campaign, I mobilized youth in my community to participate in the campaign.
    • For that, I nominated to be a global community champion with Empower women.
    • I support Empower women online by sharing resources, Led discussion and stories.
    • I learned a lot of values and concepts about Empowerment Women and be active more digitally.
    • This opportunity open my horizon, it increased my professional networking skills.
    • It gives me the opportunity to participate in youthful Europe Program and developed my insight about values and explores new approaches about civic participation in social issue.
    • I return with a positive energy to pursue my passion to make a difference .I met some of my friends to preparing t make a plan about what are the steps that we need to follow?, And, I think we on the road!.

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    • 1- I want to collaborate and engage with delegates and organization that working for social change and gender equality.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 1- I want to collaborate and engage with delegates and organizations that working for social change and gender equality.
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    • 2-• I believe it is meaningful experience because it makes me connected with a growing network of peers from around the world working for development and social change.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 2-• I believe that it is a meaningful experience because it makeeps me connected with a growing network of peers from around the world working for development and social change.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • It will be a great opportunity to explore efforts to create and strengthen community-driven development for policy change.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It will be a great opportunity to explore efforts to create and strengthen the community-driven development for policy change.
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  • câu 7
    • 3- My country facing a lot of issue related to youth development, Finance, democracy, gender equality and achieve social justice.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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      My country
      is facing a lot of issues related to youth development, Ffinance, democracy, gender equality and achievement of social justice.
    • 3-¶
      My country
      is facing a lot of issues related to youth development, Ffinance, democracy, gender equality and the achievement of social justice.
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    • So, we collaborate with student Activities in the other universities to raise awareness about gender equality and achieve social justice.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • So, we collaborate with student Activities in the other universities to raise awareness about gender equality and achieve social justice.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
    • We collaborate with Youth Arab voice to make debate about this issues and let everyone express about his views.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • We collaborate with Youthng Arabic voice to make debate about thisese issues and let everyone express about histheir views.
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    • We are hoping to organize workshops to youth interested to increase the slices that we are working it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • We are hopinghope to organize workshops tofor youths interested to increase the slices thaton which we are working it.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • 5-I participated in international Women's Day and it was be the beginning to meet peers interested in gender equality.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 5-I participated in international Women's Day and it was be the beginning to meet peers interested in gender equality.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
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    • It gives me the opportunity to participate in youthful Europe Program and developed my insight about values and explores new approaches about civic participation in social issue.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It gives me the opportunity to participate in the youthful Europe Program and developed my insight about values and explores new approaches about civic participation in social issues.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19
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    • I return with a positive energy to pursue my passion to make a difference .I met some of my friends to preparing t make a plan about what are the steps that we need to follow?, And, I think we on the road!.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I returned with a positive energy to pursue my passion to make a difference .I met some of my friends towho are preparing to make a plan about what are the steps that we need to follow?, And, I think we are on theat road!. ¶
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