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  • Mohamed is an undergraduate Civil Engineering student.
    • He is a young Egyptian social activist, who advocates for Empowerment women and democracy.
    • He has been involved in social activism since 2010, participated in 25january revolution in Egypt in 2011.
  • He has been volunteering in a lot of activities.
    • He nominated with Empower Women as one of sixty people to be a Global Community Champion.
    • He advocates for women’s economic empowerment online and in him university.
    • Also, He Volunteered with UN Women to organize International Women's Day at American University in Cairo.
  • He volunteered with Art2Care initiative in Children's Cancer Hospital Foundation 5735.
    • He assisted children during the retreatment period by promoting artist class where they could express their feeling by drawing and dancing.
    • He participated in Youthful Europe Program in Tunisia with Salto Euro-med; the program gives him chance to explore different approaches towards Europe through active participation.
    • Also, He participated in Active Citizen Program that helped Him understanding to know more about intercultural dialogue and social development.
  • He took Professional Development Course with St.
    • Andrew’s Refugee Services (StARS), it helps him to access new opportunities and strengthen my capacity about working with migrant.He is currently enrolled in ‘practical peace’ studies program with YaLa Academy.

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    • He assisted children during the retreatment period by promoting artist class where they could express their feeling by drawing and dancing.
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    • He assisted children during the re-treatment period by promoting artist class where they could express their feelings by drawing and dancing.
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    • He participated in Youthful Europe Program in Tunisia with Salto Euro-med; the program gives him chance to explore different approaches towards Europe through active participation.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • He participated in Youthful Europe Program in Tunisia with Salto Euro-med; t. The program gives him chance to explore different approaches towards Europe through active participation.
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    • Also, He participated in Active Citizen Program that helped Him understanding to know more about intercultural dialogue and social development.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Also, Hhe participated in the Active Citizen Program that helped Hhim to understanding to know more about the intercultural dialogue and social development.
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    • Andrew’s Refugee Services (StARS), it helps him to access new opportunities and strengthen my capacity about working with migrant.He is currently enrolled in ‘practical peace’ studies program with YaLa Academy.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Andrew’s Refugee Services (StARS), i. It helpsed him to access new opportunities and strengthen myhis capacity about working with migrant.s. He is currently enrolled in ‘practical peace’ studies program with YaLa Academy.
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