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  • Essay

  • More and more people want to be popular.
    • But whereas some people dream about fame, others find it unpleasant.
  • So, what really are the advantages and disadvantages of being rich and famous?
  • To start with, if you are a superstar, it will be easy for you to meet famous and interesting people, because you have connections.
    • Furthermore, companies give you a discounts or even different things for free, for publicity.
    • What is more, if you do charity, it will be easier to attract people in your organisation.
  • And I'm not talking about VIP parties and loyal fans.
  • However, being famous and rich has its disadvantages.
    • Firstly, paparazzis always follow you.
  • And not only you, but sometimes your family and friends.
    • Secondly, people can dismiss horrible gossips about you.
  • Moreover, you can have haters or crazy addictive fans.
  • Also you can get a star fever!

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