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  • Gap year program

    • The three things I love the most are certainly the nature, children and animals.
    • That's why I chose the program: "Gap Years with Daktari Bush School & Wildlife Orphanage."The program lasts from 1 week to 3 months and is situated on a reserve near Kruger Park in South Africa.
    • The project is a non profit organisation.
    • The purpose of this program is to teach underprivileged schoolchildren to love and respect the wildlife.
    • Children can learn with volunteers and also encounter wild animals.
    • Volunteers have an important role in children's education with more focus on topics such as anti-poaching, wildlife, private game reserves, ecosystems and tourism.
    • The only difficulty is that it is not always easy to be a teacher with young children, and the language barrier is also very destabilizing.

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    • That's why I chose the program: "Gap Years with Daktari Bush School & Wildlife Orphanage."The program lasts from 1 week to 3 months and is situated on a reserve near Kruger Park in South Africa.
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    • That's why I chose the program: "Gap Years with Daktari Bush School & Wildlife Orphanage." The program lasts forom 1 week to 3 months and is situated on a reserve near Kruger Park in South Africa.
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    • That's why I chose the program:, "Gap Years with Daktari Bush School & Wildlife Orphanage."The". This program lasts frombetween 1 week toand 3 months and is situated on a reserve near Kruger Park in South Africa.
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    • Volunteers have an important role in children's education with more focus on topics such as anti-poaching, wildlife, private game reserves, ecosystems and tourism.
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    • Volunteers have an important role in the children's education with more of a focus on topics such as anti-poaching, wildlife, private game reserves, ecosystems, and tourism.
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    • The only difficulty is that it is not always easy to be a teacher with young children, and the language barrier is also very destabilizing.
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    • The only difficulty is that it is not always easy to be a teacher with young children, and the language barrier is also very destabilizsing.
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