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Текст од kunalc101 - English

  • Please review a poem written by me called Indifference

  • Alas, indifferent were they.
  • To the non-decaying toxic filth around them.
  • To the deafening noise and pollution where they lived.
    • To the cry of countless animals and birds which were killed for money, food or merely passing enjoyment.
  • To the helpless cries and tears of mother nature, blinded by their endless greed and callousness.
    • To their own sons and relatives mutilated or killed in one bloodthirsty war after another.
    • To the haunting spectre of an anonymously regimented and fully mechanized society.
  • To an education which produced men which act like machines and machines which act like men.
  • To the giant economic machine which sucked all beauty, spontaneity and joy out of fellow human beings.
    • To universal human suffering blinded by delusions of class, caste, creed, color and nationality.
  • To the everlasting human cry to reach its fullest noble expression. Ah!
  • So utterly indifferent were they, to their own callous indifference.
  • Indeed, neither their masks of love nor hatred were true except their cold, calculated and deathlike indifference.

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English