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Text from Csargsoto - English

  • My City

    • Today, I'm going to describe my City.
    • It's a big city for Venezuelan's viewpoint, perhaps it is small for other nations.
    • It placed just next to the biggest lake of South America.
  • It's called Maracaibo.
    • its weather is hot like the hell, the hottest city of my country, but it isn't a desert, there are a lot of plants and rivers and today was raining because a hurricane was near.
  • The city's main economic activity is the Petroleum business.
    • In fact this is extended to all country, therefore around of my city is extracted the most important production part, specially into the lake.
    • However, my city, for extention, my country isn't rich and prosperous.
    • Petroleum has been our blessedness and curse because the most of our majors, governors and presidents have been corrupt and thieves and the people don't know to choice their governments.
    • Everyone wants a own bite in the corrupted Petroleum business, but few have success.
    • Now Petroleum prices are the lowest in thirteen years, and for cause of this and bad government administration, there aren't food and medicines, people are fighting to find them and others are dieing in the hospitals.
    • Actually we are living hard times, and now I don't have nice things to tell about my city.

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    • its weather is hot like the hell, the hottest city of my country, but it isn't a desert, there are a lot of plants and rivers and today was raining because a hurricane was near.
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    • ¶itsThe weather here is hot like the hell, the hottest city of my country, but it isn't a desert, there are a lot of plants and rivers and today it was raining because a hurricane was near.
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    • ¶itsThe weather here is hot like the hell, the hottest city of my country, b. But it isn't a desert, there are a lot of plants and rivers and today it was raining because a hurricane was nearby.
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    • In fact this is extended to all country, therefore around of my city is extracted the most important production part, specially into the lake.
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    • In fact this is extended to allwidely spread trough the country, therefore around of my city is extracted the most important production part, especially intofrom the lake.
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    • In fact this is extended to allover the country, t. Therefore around of my city is extracted the most important production part, specially intofrom the lake.
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    • Petroleum has been our blessedness and curse because the most of our majors, governors and presidents have been corrupt and thieves and the people don't know to choice their governments.
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    • Petroleum has been our blessednessing and curse because the most of our majors, governors and presidents have been corrupt and thieves and the people don't know to choicose their governments.
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    • Petroleum has been either our blessednessing and curse because the most of our majors, governors and presidents have been corrupt and thieves and the people don't know how to choicose their governments.
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    • Now Petroleum prices are the lowest in thirteen years, and for cause of this and bad government administration, there aren't food and medicines, people are fighting to find them and others are dieing in the hospitals.
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    • Now Petroleum prices are the lowest in thirteen years, and for because of this and bad government administration, there aren't food and medicines, people are fighting to find them and others are dieying in the hospitals.
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    • Now Petroleum prices are the lowest induring last thirteen years, and for this cause of this andand for the cause of bad government administration, there aren'tis no food and medicines, people are fighting to find them and, while others are dieying in the hospitals.
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