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  • My first article

    • Well, finally i decide learn English...
    • for this reason i need practice my skills in this language, the first step for me is see a lot of videos about some things very interesting for me, for example the soccer games or the second world War or maybe about animals and nature.
    • The last week i was watching the shark week in national geographic channel, during the video i feel a little nervous because the sharks are very dangerous when the people is in his territory.

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    • for this reason i need practice my skills in this language, the first step for me is see a lot of videos about some things very interesting for me, for example the soccer games or the second world War or maybe about animals and nature.
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    • fFor this reason iI need to practice my skills in this language,. tThe first step for me is seeto watch a lot of videos about some things which are very interesting for me, for example the soccer games or the second world War or maybe about animals and nature.
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    • The last week i was watching the shark week in national geographic channel, during the video i feel a little nervous because the sharks are very dangerous when the people is in his territory.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • The last week iI was watching the shark week in national geographic channel, dur.While watching the video iI feelt a little nervous because the sharks awere very dangerous when the people iswere in hits territory.
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