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Text from JorgeMenaM - English

  • Have you ever played "Seen"?

  • Last night I downloaded an Android app called "Seen".
  • It seemed to be fun, so I played it.
    • But it really was a deep mind-blowing game.
    • The main screen is like a facebook messenger chat, which has a predetermined storyline, and you have a blank keyboard, so you just type but the replies are predetermined too.
    • Most of time you talk to your new school partner, she texts you asking for help in chemistry and then become friends but your character will slowly fall in love with her.
    • As time goes by, she become other guy's girlfriend and you're dropped to the friendzone foverer.
    • On her birthday your confess your feelings for her and she answers she used to like you too, even the first time she texted you was due she wanted to know you, but those feelings are gone.
    • They stop talking for months, and the only time they chatted again, it didn't end well.
    • After weeks you receive a text message from her mom, saying that she's being looking for her daughter, who went out and hasn't returned yet.
    • You try to help find her, but then you realize she has been hit by a car and she's got anmestic.
  • Days later, she texts you again, having exactly the same conversation as the first time, asking for help in chemistry, but she doesn't remember you at all.
  • It's like a new start.
  • That's the end.
    • I just ended up thinking about it over and over, you know, about the times life gives you a second chance.
  • Thank you guys.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • The main screen is like a facebook messenger chat, which has a predetermined storyline, and you have a blank keyboard, so you just type but the replies are predetermined too.
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    • The main screen is like a fFacebook messenger chat, which has a predetermined story-line, and you have a blank keyboard, so you just type but the replies are predetermined too.
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    • The main screen is like a fFacebook messenger, chat, which has a predetermined storyline, and you have a blank keyboard, so you just type but the replies are predetermined too.
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    • The main screen is like a fFacebook mMessenger chat, which has a predetermined storyline, and you have a blank keyboard, so you just type but the replies are predetermined too.
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    • Most of time you talk to your new school partner, she texts you asking for help in chemistry and then become friends but your character will slowly fall in love with her.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Most of the time you talk to your new school partner, she texts you asking for help in chemistry and then become friends but your character will slowly fall in love with her.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Kommentit
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Most of the time you talk to your new school partner, she texts you asking for help in chemistry and then become friends, but your character will slowly fall in love with her.
      lonely979lonely979 profile picture Kommentit
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Most of time you talk to your new school partner, she texts you asking for help in chemistry and then you become friends but your character will slowly fall in love with her.
      StClurStClur profile picture Kommentit
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Most of the time you talk to your new school partner, she texts you asking for help in chemistry and then you become friends but your character will slowly fall in love with her.
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    • On her birthday your confess your feelings for her and she answers she used to like you too, even the first time she texted you was due she wanted to know you, but those feelings are gone.
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    • On her birthday your confess your feelings for her and she answers she used to like you too, even the first time she texted you was dubecause she wanted to know you, but those feelings are gone.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Kommentit
      Äänestä nyt!
    • On her birthday your confess your feelings for her and she answers she used to like you too, even the first time she texted you was due she wanted to know you, but those feelings are gone.
      lonely979lonely979 profile picture Kommentit
      Äänestä nyt!
    • On her birthday your confess your feelings for her and she answers she used to like you too, even the first time she texted you was due to the fact that she wanted to get to know you, but those feelings are gone.
      StClurStClur profile picture Kommentit
      Äänestä nyt!
    • On her birthday your confess your feelings forto her and she answers she used to like you too, even the first time she texted you was due she wanted to know you, but those feelings are gone.
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    • After weeks you receive a text message from her mom, saying that she's being looking for her daughter, who went out and hasn't returned yet.
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    • After weeks you receive a text message from her mom, saying that she' has beingen looking for her daughter, who went out and hasn't returned yet.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Kommentit
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    • After weeks you receive a text message from her mom, saying that she's beingen looking for her daughter, who went out and hasn't returned yet.
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    • Days later, she texts you again, having exactly the same conversation as the first time, asking for help in chemistry, but she doesn't remember you at all.
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