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Social Media

• My 1st social media was Facebook, and I still use it.

• Since 2015, I'm using Whatsap and Instagram.

• Among these three social media, I prefer Facebook.

• At first, I subscribed on Facebook in the order to meet old friends with whom I lose contact.

• But over time, I notice that I've changed my goal about my use of Facebook.

• Now, I'm posting more and more pictures, and I surprised myself to require better quality of pictures and to count numbe of "likes" that I get on my post.

• When I can't reach to get a huge amount of "likes", sometimes I remove the post.

• So, I wonder ,what is the real goal to be on Facebook?

• Everyone, every Facebook members (except others) pays attention to the number of "likes" which they get, and also to the quality of their picutres.

• Now, with the apparition of Insatagram and many applications which permit to preetify our pictures, everybody become member of one social media in the aim to incresase their popularity first of all, and with the purpose to make new friends and meet old friends in the second part.

• About the relationship, each social media have a bad or good side.

• The good side is that, thanks to chat boxes, and different games within it, making friends become easier.

• And sometimes, we get proximity relatonship with an old friend that we are just about to forget, or with someone who we never see.

• Socail media is also helpful to make a relationship better gor shy person, who often scared to make the first move;