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Text from mahdi1 - English

    • the wolf story

    • an old man who was shepher has said: one wolf farrowed in the module in the my corral and that wolf has 3or4 kitten.
    • that wolf secretly trafficed and cared of her kitten at the first.becase she hadnot distorbing for my sheep and for pity,l didnot expel him,but l was full taking care.
    • she went to hunt and she gave one rabit or chicken or sheep for each time.but she did not disturb to my sheeps even 1 time.
    • one time while that wolf didnot,her kittens hunted one of my sheep and killed that.
    • we waited to see what will happen،when she came back and seen this situation,she was angreing and attaked to his kitten and bited and bitten cried and scramed and then she gave his kittens and went.
    • the next day, surprisingly we saw the wolf hunted one sheep and donot kill that and threws that in my corral and came back.
    • it is a wolf by 3 character: voracity,wild,animal but undrestand,if she entrance to live's other, does not bitray to anybody who was shelter to him and she compensates if she hurts and damages.

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  • Lause 1
    • an old man who was shepher has said: one wolf farrowed in the module in the my corral and that wolf has 3or4 kitten.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • aAn old man who was a shepherd hasd said:¶one wolf farrowed in the module in the my corral and that wolf has 3 or 4 kittencubs.
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  • Lause 2
    • that wolf secretly trafficed and cared of her kitten at the first.becase she hadnot distorbing for my sheep and for pity,l didnot expel him,but l was full taking care.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ¶tThat wolf was secretly trafficked and cared of her kitten at thecubs at first.b Because she hadidno't distourbing for my sheep and for pity,l didno't expel him,but l was full taking full care.
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  • Lause 3
    • she went to hunt and she gave one rabit or chicken or sheep for each time.but she did not disturb to my sheeps even 1 time.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ¶sShe went to hunt and she gavekilled one rabbit or chicken or sheep for eachevery time.b But she did not disturb to my sheeps even 1for one time.
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  • Lause 5
    • we waited to see what will happen،when she came back and seen this situation,she was angreing and attaked to his kitten and bited and bitten cried and scramed and then she gave his kittens and went.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ¶wWe waited to see what will happen،w. When she came back and seenaw thisat situation,she wasbecame angreingy and attacked to hisher kitten and bited and bitten cried and screamed and then she gave histook her kittens and went.
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  • Lause 6
    • the next day, surprisingly we saw the wolf hunted one sheep and donot kill that and threws that in my corral and came back.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ¶tThe next day, surprisingly we saw the wolf hunteding one sheep and donobut it didn't kill that and threws that in my corral and came back.
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  • Lause 7
    • it is a wolf by 3 character: voracity,wild,animal but undrestand,if she entrance to live's other, does not bitray to anybody who was shelter to him and she compensates if she hurts and damages.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ¶iIt is a wolf byof 3 characters:¶voracity,wild,animal¶but undrerstands that,if she entranceers to live's in other,'s premises, she does not bietray to anybody who wagives shelter to himer and she compensates if she hurts and damages.
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