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Please correct my mistakes. Thank you very much.
- Try, try again.
- One day, out of the clear blue sky, Lauren asked her mom for play baseball.
- Her mom taught her how to play baseball.
- They went shopping for a new leather softball blove, a shiny, with softball (which really wasn't very soft at all).
- Mom said : "Watch the ball very closely".
- Lauren tried but she couldn't catch it.
- Mommy threw the ball many times but Lauren didn't catch it even once.
- They had a breaktime.
- They drank lemonade.
- Lauren was bouncing around the yard, she yelled: "Throw the ball some more Mommy, I'll catch it this time." Mom threw the ball right at Lauren's glove and she could catch the ball.
- Lauren hopped and jumped and shouted: "I caught it. I did it!
- I did it!" Mommy swept Lauren into her arms and twirled her around in a great big circle!
- misangocle08022004September 2016Voĉdoni nun!
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