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Text from jay_chow - English

  • Perhaps one day

  • Perhaps one day .
  • Space travel will emerge as a high class activity !
    • If I retired one day, I would spend all of my money in it !
    • When I was young, I was curious about the astronomy and searched a lot of informations of astronomy, the space is very mysterious and a lot of questions that we haven't been killed yet!
    • One of the questions is how huge the space is that make me feel fascinated, the space theory says that our space is getting big, astronomer believed that is true and consulted different aspects of information to support their theory.
  • They also did a lot of experiments to show the possibility.
    • Our space was the result of explosion from xxxx year ago, I don't know that true or not !
    • I want to find a answers through the space travel.
    • But I don't think that technology can be successful within eighty years!

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