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  • "School uniform". (Please, correct my essay))

    • People`s attitude to school uniform can be quite different: for some of them school uniform is a meaningful part of school life, but others disapprove of it.
    • In my own opinion, I believe school uniform will be brought in a lot of schools because, first and foremost, a common uniform among the pupils improves discipline.
    • Secondly, instituting school uniform, pupils` material statuses will not standing out, thus less wealthy children will not bullying.
    • Thirdly, only school uniform is able to promote equality because everyone has to wear the same.
  • Nevertheless, consider the problem from another side.
    • School uniform deprives pupils of self-expression and do not give an opportunity being themselves.
    • Moreover, the majority of parents claim uniform for pupils is too expensive.
    • I disagree with these opinions because school uniform forms a pupils` behavior.
  • Children are trying to be more attentive to immanency of people and less attentive to their appearance.
    • As for expensiveness of school uniform, I think it is not so dear, as some other clothes.
    • To conclusion, I want to say that, above all else, pupils go to school in order to get knowledge.
    • An appearance should be in the second place.

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    • People`s attitude to school uniform can be quite different: for some of them school uniform is a meaningful part of school life, but others disapprove of it.
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    • People`'s attitude to school uniforms can be quite different: for some of them school uniform is are a meaningful (important is maybe better, you decide) part of school life, but while others disapprove of it.
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    • In my own opinion, I believe school uniform will be brought in a lot of schools because, first and foremost, a common uniform among the pupils improves discipline.
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    • In my own opinion, I believe school uniforms will be brought inintroduced to a lot of schools because, first and foremost, a common uniform (among the pupils: this is obvious. maybe you should let it out) improves discipline.
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    • Secondly, instituting school uniform, pupils` material statuses will not standing out, thus less wealthy children will not bullying.
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    • Secondly, instituting school uniforms, pupils`' material statuses will not standing out, thus the less wealthy children will not bullyinge bullied.
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    • School uniform deprives pupils of self-expression and do not give an opportunity being themselves.
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    • School uniforms deprives pupil (limit students opportunities for...) pupils/students of self-expression and do not give an opportunity being themselves.
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    • Moreover, the majority of parents claim uniform for pupils is too expensive.
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    • Moreover, the majority of parents claim uniforms for pupils is/students are too expensive.¶Or like this:¶Moreover, the most parents claim uniforms for pupils/students are too expensive.
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    • To conclusion, I want to say that, above all else, pupils go to school in order to get knowledge.
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    • ToAs a conclusion, I want to say that, above all else, pupil students go to school in order to get knowledge and that the appearance should come second.
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