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Text von Arimolukina - English

  • "School uniform". (Please, correct my essay))

    • People`s attitude to school uniform can be quite different: for some of them school uniform is a meaningful part of school life, but others disapprove of it.
    • In my own opinion, I believe school uniform will be brought in a lot of schools because, first and foremost, a common uniform among the pupils improves discipline.
    • Secondly, instituting school uniform, pupils` material statuses will not standing out, thus less wealthy children will not bullying.
    • Thirdly, only school uniform is able to promote equality because everyone has to wear the same.
  • Nevertheless, consider the problem from another side.
    • School uniform deprives pupils of self-expression and do not give an opportunity being themselves.
    • Moreover, the majority of parents claim uniform for pupils is too expensive.
    • I disagree with these opinions because school uniform forms a pupils` behavior.
  • Children are trying to be more attentive to immanency of people and less attentive to their appearance.
    • As for expensiveness of school uniform, I think it is not so dear, as some other clothes.
    • To conclusion, I want to say that, above all else, pupils go to school in order to get knowledge.
    • An appearance should be in the second place.

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