Correcties

Please correct my mistakes. Thank you very much.

• Maggie Disobeys Maggie had a friend named Kara.

• Kara’s house was so far from Maggie’s house so when Maggie wanted to go to Kara’s house, her mom went there with her, her mom didn’t want Maggie went there alone.

• One day, Maggie wanted to go to Kara’s house to play but her mother was busy.

• Mommy said with Maggie that she could play with Lidsay who was next door.

• Maggie didn’t want to play with Lidsay so she went to Kara’s house by herself.

• They played with happyly.

• Mommy went to Lidsay’s house but she didn’t see Maggie, she was very worry, she ran to Kara’s house.

• She saw 2 girls who was playing together.

• While they came home, mommy didn’t say anything.

• Maggie was sad because she disobeied her mom.

• Her mom forgave her and kissed goodnight with her.