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Văn bản từ EDWARD1 - English

  • Negative experience

    • Once i walked with my acquantance, we were speaking and both had a good mood.
    • At one moment we were passing special table for armwrestling.
    • I suggested to try out this thing, my acquantance agreed with me, and we walked up to this table.
    • Of course before we started to fight i had realised that he is heavier than me by twenty kilogramm and furthermore he had been doing sports longer than me.
    • Obviously he won, in spite of that fact, what i resisted as well as i could.
    • Of course i don't know what i counted on to suggest this him and i understand that i didn't have any chance, by in spite of it i am still upset by this experience.

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    • Of course before we started to fight i had realised that he is heavier than me by twenty kilogramm and furthermore he had been doing sports longer than me.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Of course before we started to fight iI had realiszed that he iwas heavier than me by twenty kilogramms and furthermore he had been doing sports longerfor a longer period than me.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • Of course i don't know what i counted on to suggest this him and i understand that i didn't have any chance, by in spite of it i am still upset by this experience.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Of course i don't know whaty i counted on to suggest thissuggested it to him and i understandknew that i didn't haved any chances, by in spite of iut i am still upset by this experience.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Of course iI don't know what iI counted on to suggest this to him and iI understand that iI didn't have any chance, byut in spite of it iI am still upset by this experience.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6