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Văn bản từ ELENAHA - English

  • Job application

    • Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to apply for the vacant offered by your company in order to be a helper in your summer camp.
    • I heard about this position in an advert written in the newspaper of the city.
  • Nowadays, I am working in a school teaching English language and other subjects to students who are 10 years old.
    • I have been working in this school for 4 years to pupils from different levels, but always in Primary Education.
  • I have also worked in some camps during the summer carrying out different activities and games.
    • Thus, I consider myself capable to fulfil with this job.
    • I am a very extroverted person and I always try to make my classes very motivated and enjoyable.
    • As I have told you before, from my point of view my experience with children is rather long and I have had to overcome some difficult situations with some problem students.
    • Therefore, personally I find myself enough prepared to carry out this job always showing great commitment to it.
  • Moreover, as far as I am concerned, something unique I could bring to this job is the way to engage pupils in learning while they are enjoying.
    • With regards to English language, I have been studying this language for 10 years, and I continue doing it in an English academy in order to try to pass C1 exam.
    • I have been also abroad for one year in Norway which was an incredible experience for me and where I learnt fluent English .
    • If you are interested, I should be very grateful to grant me a personal interview.
    • I can be reached anytime via emal at..............or my cell phone..............
  • I enclose a resume with details of my personal experience.
  • Thank you for your time and consideration.
  • I look forward to speaking with you about this employment opportunity. Sincerely

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

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    • Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to apply for the vacant offered by your company in order to be a helper in your summer camp.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Dear Sir/Madam¶¶I am writing to apply for the vacantcy offered by your company in order to be a helper in your summer camp.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Nowadays, I am working in a school teaching English language and other subjects to students who are 10 years old.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • I have been working in this school for 4 years to pupils from different levels, but always in Primary Education.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I have been working in this school for the last 4 years towith pupils from different levels, but always in the Primary Education level.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • As I have told you before, from my point of view my experience with children is rather long and I have had to overcome some difficult situations with some problem students.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • As I have told you before, from my point of view my experience with children is rather long and I have had to overcome some difficult situations with some problematic students.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • Therefore, personally I find myself enough prepared to carry out this job always showing great commitment to it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Therefore,I personally I find myself enough prepared to carry out this job, always showing great commitment to it.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • Moreover, as far as I am concerned, something unique I could bring to this job is the way to engage pupils in learning while they are enjoying.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
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    • With regards to English language, I have been studying this language for 10 years, and I continue doing it in an English academy in order to try to pass C1 exam.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • With regards to English language, I have been studying this language for the last 10 years, and I continue doingto do it in an English academy in order to try to pass the C1 exam.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12
    • I have been also abroad for one year in Norway which was an incredible experience for me and where I learnt fluent English .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I have been alsoalso been abroad for one year in Norway which was an incredible experience for me and where I learnt fluent English¶.
      AjayKumarAjayKumar profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
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