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    • A report

    • You have been studying in an English-speaking country for some time as part of an educational exchange.
    • The director of the exchange programme is interested in improving the experience for future students.
    • He has asked you to write a report outlining why you have being doing the exchange, what you like and dislike about it and making recommendations for how it could be improved.
  • Write your report.
    • Exchange programs, a way to open your mind Introduction This report is based on my experience as learner in Pegasus educational exchange programme.
  • For this purpose, I will mention my reasons for doing the exchange.
  • After that, I will talk about the positive and negative aspects of the experience.
    • Finally, I will propose my personal recommendations for improvement.
    • Why I decided to do the exchange?
    • It is widely accepted that the knowledge of several languages is reducing barriers and opening doors among citizens from different countries.
    • To get better job opportunities, in the future, was my main reason to participate in the program.
    • I wanted to improve my English.
    • What is more I was interested in opening my mind by interacting with students from different countries.
    • Aspects I like Speaking about what I like most, I have to mention I really enjoyed having traditional food in the house where I stayed.
    • Besides, the groups in the classes were not too big so we were able to profit from all the lessons.
  • What is more, the groups mixed students from different countries, so it was easier for me to know about the way of life in other countries.
    • Aspects I dislike However, I was not agreed at all with the fact that I had to share my room with other learners.
    • We were three and in spite of having a good relationship, we rarely had discussions and so on…I missed my space and my intimacy.
    • Apart from that, the lessons were too long for me; It was an intensive course, eight hours every day…At the end of the day, my head was full of information.
  • Finally, I should mention the bad quality of the internet connection.
    • Conclusion From the information provided in this report, it is clear that I am really happy with the exchange programme in general but it is worthy to make some changes such as: the number of students in every bedroom, the last of the lessons and revise the internet connection.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • You have been studying in an English-speaking country for some time as part of an educational exchange.
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    • You have been studying in an English-speaking country for some time a, As part of an educational exchange.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
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  • câu 3
    • He has asked you to write a report outlining why you have being doing the exchange, what you like and dislike about it and making recommendations for how it could be improved.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • He has asked you to write a report outlining why you have beingen doing the exchange, what you liked and disliked about it and makingif you'd have any recommendations foron how it could be improved.
    • He has asked you to write a report outlining why you have beingen doing the exchange, what you like and dislike about it and making recommendations for how it could be improved.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Exchange programs, a way to open your mind Introduction This report is based on my experience as learner in Pegasus educational exchange programme.
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    • Exchange programs, a way to open your mind¶Introduction -¶This report is based on my experience as a learner in Pegasus educational exchange programme.
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  • câu 10
    • It is widely accepted that the knowledge of several languages is reducing barriers and opening doors among citizens from different countries.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It is widely accepted that the knowledge of several languages is reducinges barriers and openings doors among citizens from different countries.
    • It is widely accepted that the knowledge of several languages is reducing the barriers and opening doors among citizens from different countries.
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  • câu 11
    • To get better job opportunities, in the future, was my main reason to participate in the program.
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    • To get better job opportunities, in the future, was my main reason to participatehe main reason why I took part in the programme was to get the chance to have better job opportunities in the programfuture.
    • To get better job opportunities, in the future, was my main reason to participate in the program.
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    • What is more I was interested in opening my mind by interacting with students from different countries.
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    • What is moreMoreover I was interested in opening my mind by interacting with students from different countries.
    • What is moreMore than that I was interested in opening my mind by interacting with students from different countries.
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  • câu 14
    • Aspects I like Speaking about what I like most, I have to mention I really enjoyed having traditional food in the house where I stayed.
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    • Aspects I like¶Speaking abod. I really enjoyed speaking about my passions. But what I liked the most, I have to mention I really enjoyedconfess, was having traditional food in the house where I stayed.
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    • What is more, the groups mixed students from different countries, so it was easier for me to know about the way of life in other countries.
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  • câu 17
    • Aspects I dislike However, I was not agreed at all with the fact that I had to share my room with other learners.
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    • Aspects I disliked¶However, I was not agrepleased at all with the fact that I had to share my room with other learnerstudents.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17
  • câu 18
    • We were three and in spite of having a good relationship, we rarely had discussions and so on…I missed my space and my intimacy.
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    • We were three and in spite of having a good relationships, we rarely had discussions and so on…I missed having my space and my intimacy.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18
  • câu 19
    • Apart from that, the lessons were too long for me; It was an intensive course, eight hours every day…At the end of the day, my head was full of information.
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    • Apart from that, the lessoncourses were too long for me; It was an intensive course, eight hours every day…At the end of the day, my head was full ofoverfilled with information.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19
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  • câu 21
    • Conclusion From the information provided in this report, it is clear that I am really happy with the exchange programme in general but it is worthy to make some changes such as: the number of students in every bedroom, the last of the lessons and revise the internet connection.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Conclusion¶From the information provided in this report, it is clear that I am really happy with the exchange programme in general but it is worthy to make some changes such as: the number of students in every bedroom, the last of the lessons and reviseduration of lectures and the quality of the internet connection. ¶
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