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    • I like to draw picture and handmade since childhood. my major is art when I studied at the vocational high school until l'm dreamed about having the to draw something where I can take an idea and turn it into a product that offer the humanity as well and contributing to the society, so that I want to learn Industrial design in the college﹒ To obtain a challenging and demanding position, that I did some award of national design competition and I also participated in university cooperative Joint research project with companies, that will further enhance my knowledge and skills while the student.
    • During the time I got license, such as: Level B technician for screen graphic, Level C Technician for advertising design.
    • When I graduated from University.
    • With 2 senior member of small team who created the design studio, that with the accumulation of the technology and many ways of cooperation we attained four patents was approved, unfortunately after three month something happened must get job returning back Kaohsiung, thus sorry to ended our design studio, but it was really a very special experience.

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  • câu 1
    • I like to draw picture and handmade since childhood. my major is art when I studied at the vocational high school until l'm dreamed about having the to draw something where I can take an idea and turn it into a product that offer the humanity as well and contributing to the society, so that I want to learn Industrial design in the college﹒ To obtain a challenging and demanding position, that I did some award of national design competition and I also participated in university cooperative Joint research project with companies, that will further enhance my knowledge and skills while the student.
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    • I like to draw picture and handmade since childhood. my major is art whandmade pictures since childhood.When I studied at the vocational high school my major was arts until l'm dreamedt about having the to draw something where I can take an idea and turn it into a product that offers theo humanity as well and contributinges to the society, so. Because of that I want to learn Industrial design in the college﹒ To obtain a challenging and demanding position, t. That I did somewon an award ofat a national design competition and I also participated in university cooperative Joint research project with companies, that will further enhance my knowledge and skills while theas a student.
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  • câu 2
    • During the time I got license, such as: Level B technician for screen graphic, Level C Technician for advertising design.
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    • During the time I got licenses, such as: Level B technician for screen graphic, Level C Technician for advertising design.
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    • With 2 senior member of small team who created the design studio, that with the accumulation of the technology and many ways of cooperation we attained four patents was approved, unfortunately after three month something happened must get job returning back Kaohsiung, thus sorry to ended our design studio, but it was really a very special experience.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • With 2 senior members of a small team who created the design studio, that with the accumulation of the technology and many ways of cooperation we attained four patents which was approved, u. Unfortunately after three months something happened. We must get a job while returning back to Kaohsiung, thus. Thus we are sorry to ended our design studio, but it was really a very special experience.
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